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Take it,
My countryside,
Take it and make it mine,
Nothing can take my land away,
Nothing...

Its time,
Time to fix it,
Time to make the wrongs right,
Beg, clean her off and start my life,
Please, no...

I'm sorry,
She cried all night,
'Cause of one little fight,
My little underperformer,
Last time...

Your mine,
Soiled angel,
Don't make me force it now,
Shes breaking away from all I've given,
Digging...

Rain pours,
A shallow grave,
Climbing in, soil tumbles,
She shovels, I beg of her, say it again...
Good slave.
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December Form Challenge!
Entry for 05-12-09.
Prompt is Breathe.
Form is Cinq-Cinquain.

~ProjectDFC


Cinq-Cinquain is a poem with no fixed length, each stanza has 5 lines, first line has 2 syllables, second has 4, third has 6, fourth has 8, fifth has 2.

It goes like:
24682 24682 24682 etc.
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Very well written :)
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=DragonsChest Dec 5, 2009  Professional Writer
That looks like a challenge to write one of those... :nod:
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Mhmm, interesting though.
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